| Identifying the Argument of an Essay |
Spotting the Reasons in the Editorial (Third Page)
Paragraph 3
This paragraph continues to give
us specific information about the federal government's
involvement in the school district; in fact, this information
states what the federal government wants the school district to
do: "to alternate boys and girls events on 'prime' days and
during 'prime' times." We are then given definitions of
prime day and prime time. The editorial also tells us what the 1993 agreement
required the school district to do: "to rotate girls and
boys basketball games to provide an equivalent amount of
prime-time games." This means that the school district would
have to make sure that the number of boys basketball games after
6 p.m. is the same as the number of girls basketball games after
6 p.m. In other words under the 1993 agreement, girls basketball
games could all be played on Mondays,Tuesdays,Wednesdays, or
Thursdays after 6 p.m. but the boys basketball games could still
all be played on Fridays after 6 p.m. The new demands of the
federal government that go beyond the 1993 agreement are stated
at the end of paragraph 3: 1) the requirement applies not only to
basketball games but now also to football and volleyball games,
and 2) there must be an equal number of games not only during
prime time (after 6 p.m.) but now also on prime days (a school
day which is followed by a no-school day). But
are these statements reasons which support the
conclusion of the editorial?
Let's test them.
Conclusion: The federal government shouldn't
dictate athletics schedules
(BECAUSE) Reason 1: The 1993 agreement required that boys
and girls basketball
games
be rotated to provide an equivalent amount of prime
time
games.
(BECAUSE) Reason
2: The government
extended its demands to include prime
days as
well as the sports of football and volleyball.
(BECAUSE) Reason 3: The government has imposed a $200,000
federal fine.
Do these statements make sense
as reasons? Do they directly support the conclusion?
No, they don't seem to make sense
as statements that directly
support the conclusion
Then what
are they? Look at
them again. Are
they examples of something?
Could be --but examples of what? The government made them
sign an agreement;
the government extended its demands; the government imposed a
fine. What
are these things examples of? Aren't these things direct examples of
meddling?
Yes! These three reasons above function
as examples which provide support for
the reason we found in the first paragraph:
The
federal nanny is meddling again.
Let's summarize the argument thus far in standard form on
the next page.
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Last revision: June 6,1998
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